"Digital Empathy" Student Writing Lesson

What are some ways—digital or otherwise—that you get strength and support to fight world suck with awesome?
Still from "The Fault in Our Stars."

An image from The Fault in Our Stars. Photo courtesy of Twentieth Century Fox.

The YES! online article "How the Real Teens Behind ‘The Fault in Our Stars’ Are Bringing Empathy to the Internet" by Christopher Zumski Finke is a story about the now-millions strong Nerdfighter movement and its dedication to “increase awesome and decrease world suck.” Finke shares how the first-ever, safe, inclusive Internet community mobilizes acts of kindness and empathy toward others.

Students will use Christopher Zumski Finke’s article to write about where they find inspiration for making this world a better (less suckier) place.

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YES! Magazine Article and Writing Prompt

Read the article: How the Real Teens Behind "The Fault in Our Stars" Are Bringing Empathy to the Internet by Christopher Zumski Finke.

Writing Prompt: Parents often label the Internet as a hotbed for cruelty and bullying. Nerdfighters prove the Internet can be used for good, that it can be a place to create community that combats negativity—or “world suck”—with “awesome.” What are some ways—digital or otherwise—that you get strength and support to fight world suck with awesome?

 

Writing Guidelines

The writing guidelines below are intended to be just that—a guide. Please adapt to fit your curriculum.

  • Provide an original essay title
  • Reference the article
  • Limit the essay to no more than 700 words
  • Pay attention to grammar and organization
  • Be original. provide personal examples and insights
  • Demonstrate clarity of content and ideas

This writing exercise meets several Common Core State Standards for grades 6-12, including W. 9-10.3 and W. 9-10.14 for Writing, and RI. 9-10 and RI. 9-10.2 for Reading: Informational Text.*

*This standard applies to other grade levels. "9-10" is used as an examples.

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Sample Essays 

The essays below were selected as winners for the Fall 2014 Student Writing Competition. Please use them as sample essays or mentor text. The ideas, structure, and writing style of these essays may provide inspiration for your own students' writing—and an excellent platform for analysis and discussion.

 

Combating the "World Suck" of Baseball Tryouts with "Awesome" by Bowie Shreiber, Grade 7

Read Bowie's essay that tells how he was able to brave the excruciating world suck stress of baseball tryouts and find awesome.

 

The Literal Heart Sustains an Ailing Body by Ally S., Grade 11

Read Ally's essay that tells how she found the strength to cope with mental illness through the support of the same Nerdfighter online community.

 

The Internet: A Beautiful Place to Be a Harbinger of Awesome by Shannon Hickey, Birmingham-Southern College

Read Shannon's essay about the solace and awesome she found on the Internet as a queer trans Catholic kid, and her desire to spread that acceptance to younger people experiencing suckiness.

 

Anita and Tavi's New Curriculum by Tori Gardner, Grade 10

Read Tori's essay that reveals the unexamined misogyny of the Internet, and what we can do to fight against it.

 

Response from author Christopher Zumski Finke to student essay winners. 

 

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